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Diary Entries

A diary is a personal account of the happenings, thoughts and feelings of a person.

Pupils have been looking at 

*War diaries- Anne Frank

*Travel diaries- Roald Amundsen's expedition to the South Pole

*Diet diaries

*Dream diaries

*Historical diaries

Here's a diary entry that Rang a Sé wrote together based on the class novel "The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas"...

16th December 1939

Dear Diary,

                                  I’m really confused. I don’t really understand. I found Maria packing my bag. She was in my closet again digging through my things. I will talk to mother about this. She won’t tell me why she is packing.

I rushed into the hall and saw Mother. She looked upset. She told me to go downstairs. I asked her what was going on and she informed that that we were moving. I can’t believe that this is happening. My friends and I have been making plans for the summer. I wonder if I will ever get to talk to my friends again.

Narrative Writing

Pupils of Rang a Cúig and Rang a Sé have been looking at and practising Narrative Writing.

Golden Rules of Narrative Writing

Always plan your story 
Use a maximum of 3/4 characters
Give character descriptions
 Use the past tense
Use descriptive language to create images
Magic number 3
Paragraphs
Use Sentence Starters

List of Sentence Starters

Before...

Soon...

By...

Meanwhile...

Next...

About...

At...

Once...

Later...

Suddenly...

All...

Somebody...

Carefully...

Excitedly...

Somewhere...

Despite...

Sadly...

Running...

Nevertheless...

Poor...

Early...

Suppose...

Just...

Perhaps...

Startled...

When...

Happily...

After...

Most...

Indeed...

Without...

Shortly after...

However...

Giggling...

Although...

In any event...

Remember...

So...

When...

Suppose...